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Ancient Greek Mythology, Australian poet, Cyclops, Formal poetry, Homer, Homer's Odyssey, Laertes, Odysseus, Petrarchan sonnet, poem, poetry, Polyphemus, Poseidon, sonnet, Ulysses
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War-wearied are the sailors on the sea.
An isle they reach, a chance to slake their thirst,
To satisfy their hunger โ but they durst
Not raise the wrath of Polyphemus โ he
Who owns this cave โ but take his stores and flee!
Too late! The Cyclops has returned, and first
Two heroes he devours: โYou are all cursed!
You sail here but to make a meal for me!โ
A stone he rolls, the caveโs wide mouth to block.
And in the morn two more men are consumed.
He then unblocks the cave and drives his sheep
Outside, reseals the cave, and leads his flock
To pastures, there to graze. โWe are not doomed,โ
Says wise Odysseus, โThe giant must sleep.โ
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โSo craft a pointed stake, a sturdy spear.
Bring out our strong and undiluted wine.โ
And in the evening comes the giant to dine
On two more men. Odysseus says: โHere,
Drink of our wine.โ His comrades cower in fear.
โTell me your name โ you of the stronger spine,
And I will gift you as a guest. Divine
Poseidon is my sire โ to him Iโm dear.โ
Odysseus: โNobody is my name.โ
Polyphemus: โNobody Iโll eat last.โ
Now drunk, the Cyclops slumbers, soon heโll wake;
The Cyclops, wise Odysseus will maim:
The spear into the giant’s eye is cast.
He wakes in dreadful pain โ pulls out the stake.
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His friends come as he screams in agony โ
They gather by the cave and wonder, why?
โWho hurts you Polyphemus?โ is their cry.
โNobody hurts me! Nothing can I see!
Nobody!โ Comes the blinded giant’s plea.
And hearing this they shake their heads and sigh โ
Advise, since madness none there can deny:
โPray that the gods restore your sanity!โ
Next morning Polyphemus moves the stone.
And searches all his sheep as they move by
For his tormentors โ but not one is found.
For each clings underneath a sheep, alone.
Knowing full well that if heโs found heโll die,
He dare not move, nor does he make a sound.
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Down to their ship the heroes swiftly run,
As Polyphemus screams and hurls great stones:
โIโll sink your ship, my teeth will grind your bones!โ
Odysseus: โ I am Laertesโs son!
And freedom from your clutches we have won!โ
The heroes cheer and Polyphemus moans.
A prayer to great Poseidon then he groans:
โMy father, I know Iโm your blessed one.
This cruelty, by these men, you must avenge.
Destroy them and their ship; my only eye
Will never see again โ Lord, take their lives!
And great Poseidon will take his revenge
For all the men but one are soon to die โ
Odysseus, resourceful one, survives.
โ D.N. OโBrien
Now youโre talking! Not one of these revisionist versions!
I guess with the revisionists it’s forget accuracy of translation, just get on with a radical feminist rewrite.
If you canโt admire Ulysses, whom can you admire?
Justin Trudeau…….?