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7th Division A.I.F., australian formal poetry, Balikpapan, bush poet, Bush Poetry, Klandasan, poem, poetry
From Syria to Milne Bay,
At Shaggy ridge, the fall of Lae,
Two men had seen each other right,
Now one last battle left to fight.
From landing craft they hit the sand;
At Klandasan the diggers land.
The Alligators roll ahead,
But quiet and still, a man lies dead.
He thought the end within his reach,
But now he sleeps upon this beach.
His blankets are the tropic sands
And at his head his rifle stands
With slouch hat for a diggerโs cross,
For those to come, to mark the loss,
As by the grave there stands his mate;
For some the war will end too late.
So many “if onlys” in the last lines. ๐ฆ Good one.
Thanks.
You have a gift for these ones
Glad you liked it.
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From a Dennis O’Brien, a talented writer and devoted son – he remembers!
Once again, thanks GP.
You deserve recognition.
Nicely done…..kudos…chuq
Glad you liked it lobotero.
I tried to write poems about my Vietnam experiences and just could not get it right…..you are good keep up the good work….chuq
Perhaps all wars end too late….and begin too early, come to that.
Indeed – thanks.
This is beautiful and tragic- thank you for sharing.
I’m glad you liked it Anne Clare.
Very well written as conveys the message that we never know what lies ahead.
Thanks Gypsy Bev, and true words.
A moving poem, Dennis. Thanks to GP for reblogging
Thank you John.
Dennis, when you get some time, you might want to drop by my site and read what wonderful comments have been left about your work!
Thanks GP – I didn’t really expect this response. Thanks for reblogging – I didn’t even think of that.
Wonderful Dennis – GP’s reposting brought me here.
Hope and trust all is well,
Eric
Hello there Eric! Great to hear from you and glad you liked the poem. All is well with me and I hope with you. Cheers
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Thank you – glad you liked it.